Pop Quiz Answers
1. There's several reasons you'd of been wiser to tour in the
fall.
- "There's" should be "There are" because
the word "reasons" is plural. In general, just avoid the false
start of "There's" or "There are." (In this
case you could begin "For several reasons....")
- Change "you'd of been" to "you'd have
been."
- Making "fall" lower case is correct. Seasons aren't capitalized
unless they're part of a formal name or title (Fall Conference).
2. We fly to Atlanta, Georgia next Sunday and plan to stay in the South
for two weeks.
- You need a comma after "Georgia." Whenever you write a city
and state, you need punctuation marks before and after the state.
- Capitalizing "South" is correct because it is a place like
Sarasota or the West Coast. When it is a direction ("Travel south
one mile and turn left at Main Street"), lower case is correct.
3. I worked for the Smiths for a long period of time; it was a very
unique experience.
- "Smiths" is correct without an apostrophe. The impulse to
write "Smith's" doesn't make sense because it's
simply plural, not possessive. ("Pat Smith's car" would
be correct.) Pluralize names the same way you pluralize ordinary words.
- "Period of time" is a common redundancy. Use "period" or "time" one
or the other.
- The semicolon is fine when you have two relatively short sentences that
are closely related. You're also correct to write it as two
distinct sentences.
- Because "unique" means "one-of-a-kind," modifying it with "very" doesn't
make sense. Delete "very."
4. My sister-in-laws jogged everyday of the vacation.
- The right way to make "sister-in-law" plural is "sisters-in-law." (The
same rule applies to "holes-in-one" or "attorneys general.")
- Watch out for "everyday." It is one word as an adjective ("everyday
occurrence"), but here it's an adverb so it should be two words
("every day").
5. I started my job in August, 1978 and on August 15, 2000, handed my
resignation in.
- "August 1978" gets no comma because it's just a month
and year.
- "August 15, 2000," is correct. You need a comma before and after the
year because you're writing the exact date.
- Ending the sentence with "in" is okay (you are allowed
to end
a sentence with a preposition). In this case, however, you can rearrange
the words
and avoid the weak ending without making the phrasing awkward ("handed
in my resignation").