{"id":619,"date":"2015-05-28T23:40:34","date_gmt":"2015-05-29T03:40:34","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.normfriedman.com\/blog\/?p=619"},"modified":"2018-06-26T15:55:00","modified_gmt":"2018-06-26T19:55:00","slug":"more-cloudy-issues","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.normfriedman.com\/blog\/more-cloudy-issues\/","title":{"rendered":"More cloudy Issues"},"content":{"rendered":"

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Let’s keep the quiz momentum going another week. Try your hand at identifying one or more errors in the following sentences.<\/p>\n

1. If you’re wondering where my Dad is, Uncle Al saw him hop in the hotel bar.<\/p>\n

2. Because the reception is from 5\u20137 pm, \u00a0I hope you’ll stay for awhile.<\/p>\n

3. I need to follow-up with my sister-in-laws to see if either can give you a lift.<\/p>\n

The answers<\/h2>\n

1. \u00a0If you’re wondering where my Dad is, Uncle Al saw him hop in the hotel bar.<\/em>
\nA) “Dad” shouldn’t get an initial cap here because of the word “my.” That makes “dad” a regular noun like “parent.” Without the “my,” “Dad” is correct because then it’s treated the same as a name. (I lent Dad my jacket.)<\/p>\n

B) I think we’d better drag Dad home if he’s still hopping all over the bar. Or maybe he’s not hopping in<\/span> the bar. Maybe we should have written that he hopped “into<\/span> the hotel bar.”\u00a0So we might walk in<\/span> a mall for exercise, but when we walk into<\/span> a mall, we are entering. (Jumping into the shower is dangerous enough; please don’t jump in the shower. That repeated action is asking for trouble.)<\/p>\n

2. Because the reception is from 5\u20137 pm, \u00a0I hope you’ll stay for awhile.<\/em>
\nA) The “en dash” between 5 and 7 (with no spaces around it) is correct as a substitute for “to,” but here we should go ahead and use “to” as the parallel companion to “from.” So either of these constructions is fine: The reception is from<\/span> 5 to<\/span> 7 pm. The reception is 5\u20137 pm. <\/em>(Note that “pm” is just a style choice. You might like “p.m.” or “PM.”)<\/p>\n

B) “Awhile” and “a while” are not the same. After a preposition like “in” or “for,” use “a while” (completing the prepositional phrase), but after a verb like “stay” the adverb “awhile” is correct. So we might\u00a0visit for a while<\/em> or visit awhile<\/em>.<\/p>\n

3. I need to follow-up with my sister-in-laws to see if either can give you a lift.
\n<\/em>A) The hyphen in “follow-up” is often correct (e.g., as an adjective in “follow-up calls”), but here we want two separate words, the verb “follow” and adverb “up.” So it should be “need to follow up” (no hyphen).<\/p>\n

B) The way to pluralize “sister-in-law” is adding “s” to “sister,” not “law.” We want “sisters-in-law.” (And if we know any golfers with multiple aces, they have shot “holes-in-one.”)<\/p>\n

In addition to presenting workshops on writing in the workplace, Norm Friedman is a writer, editor, and writing coach. His\u00a0<\/em>100+ Instant Writing Tips<\/span><\/a>\u00a0is a brief \u201cnon-textbook\u201d to help individuals overcome common writing errors and write with more finesse and impact. Learn more at\u00a0http:\/\/www.normfriedman.com\/index.shtml<\/a>.<\/em><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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